Blog Tour (Review) Kings of Charleston + Giveaway

March 26, 2013 Review 12

Blog Tour (Review) Kings of Charleston + Giveaway
Fraction of Stone by Kelley Lynn
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Publisher: Self Published
Source: Blog Tour
Release Date: July 10th 2012
Series: Kings of Charleston #1
Genres: Contemporary
Casper Whitley is forced to move to Charleston, South Carolina where she’ll be the new kid her senior year of high school. Casper’s upset about the move until she meets the Roman family’s gorgeous son, Cal, but there’s a problem. A mystery surrounds him which can be summed up in one word…Kythera. Never heard of it? Neither has Casper until she finds the word tattooed on cars, paintings and all her new friends.
After Casper’s life is threatened, someone is forced to tell the truth about her parents, the Romans and Kythera’s motives for her being in Charleston. Once the truth is revealed, she must decide whether to protect her family and Kythera’s secrets or walk away from everything she has ever known.

I received this book for free from the source listed above in exchange for an honest review. This does not affect my opinion of the book or the content of my review.


I found my thoughts really hard to organize after reading this novel so I have sorted them into a convenient Pros and Cons list.


Casper is forced to move into a new world, away from things she holds dear, to a town that seems to be surrounded by a word. Kythera. Casper finds it on a painting in her house, then on her neighborscars, and even on their bodies. The town seems to be a afraid of the name and symbol, serving the people who have it anything and everything.

The mystery keeps the plot interesting because the reader is just as desperate to reveal the mystery around the word and people who wield it. In this aspect, the mystery is unpredictable and done in a way that takes almost the entire novel to uncover but still keeps you interested.   

Extremely well written, the words flow easily and the descriptions are vivid. It is very easy to imagine people and settings. Spelling and grammar weren’t an issue, I think I spotted maybe one or two grammatical errors.

The Ending
At first I was really confused, there was a definite climax and resolution but… the story continued. It seemed like a entirely new plot started and I found myself getting really bored until it picked back up again at the very end. I wish it would have ended in a different section, but the cliffhanger was a strong ending in and of itself.


Unfortunately, the story was heavily brought down by lack of character development and connection to the reader, and a generic mold all the characters seemed to fit in, with one differing from another just by hair color. Some of their behaviorisms really made me puzzled, Casper seemed like she had two personalities at times.

Keeping with the characters, the relationship between Casper and Cal was really hard to take seriously. There was instant attraction, and from that point on, Casper was stuck on Cal and their relationship progressed way too fast. At one minute, Casper was angry at his sudden advances and cheesy compliments, and the next she was flirting and encouraging him. It was hard to get a read on her.

Overall, KINGS OF CHARLESTON is a book for those who like a mystery surrounding a certain group of people or word, and writing that your eyes can easily glide over and enjoy.

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About the Author: Kat H. Clayton
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Kat has been a writer her entire life, but never pursued a writing career until the characters from a short story she wrote in high school refused to go away. Finally, she sat down and wrote their story which would became The Kings of Charleston series.

Kat has been an avid reader her entire life. She enjoys all genres, but particularly Mystery and Young Adult. Mary Higgins Clark is one of her favorite authors who inspired her love of mysteries.

When she isn’t writing, Kat loves to travel, try out new recipes and hang out with her husband. She is originally from Kentucky, but currently resides in South Georgia with her husband, a cat named Frank and a dog named Lil.

12 Responses to “Blog Tour (Review) Kings of Charleston + Giveaway”

  1. kathclayton

    Thank you for taking the time to read and review my book! I’m happy you enjoyed the mystery of it all and I appreciate your honest thoughts as they will help me make this story and future books better.

  2. Say Yap

    Wow.Looking forward to read this.Something to be excited about.I love mystery.
    Joining your giveaway.I hope this is International.

  3. Adriana (BooksOnHerMind)

    I agree that the mystery keeps you drawn in and that the characters were lacking. I mean Cal was just a stranger in my eyes throughout the whole book. He was always gritting his teeth or had a worried/angry face lol. It’s cool we see eye to eye (:

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